^LOL

I guess most didn't stay tune following the knicks game last night for the

NY KNICKS POETRY SLAM

you are so damn serious gs.
This team is a joke. don't you see?

your close? kid, honestly, where was your start?
you put your name at the end like to write that took smarts,
you go and talk about this **** as if it was art
and yet it takes literally no effort to rip it apart.
look, already about 130 views but you’ve got no replies
they take a quick look fore they’ve gotta avert their eyes
I see you already edited once, but fixing this **** will take more tries
perhaps making this trash public so soon just wasn’t so wise
in fact why you thought it was a good idea to post anything at all is a wonder,
but of all the places you could share maybe a forum was the best possible blunder
cause you’d get laughed out of any poetry slam – even those ones for kids 18 and under,
and anywhere else your ass would just be torn all asunder.
we’re just lucky this is just on paper so we don’t hear you try and sing
but still that’s a lot of words wasted to say not a damn thing
what’s the matter, couldn’t think of anything clever?
putting substance into your writing was a failing endeavor.
and you still sign your name at the end, man whatever,
this just goes to show you’re delusional like Trevor
and you can’t hide - I see what you did to try and flow better
You added an s to some words or you just switched the tense
sure it rhymes now but your **** still don’t make sense
sacrificing one for the other – that mistake is immense
bad decision making like eddy curry playing defense
and, by the way, I looked over and checked.
you used the same rhyme twice.
thought you could get away with that? um, nope, no dice
that’s a no-no like serving cabernet with some ice.
let me sit you down and give a little advice
stop writing. your rhymes just aint nice
go get a new hobby. anything will suffice.
cept for fact checking – that shouldn’t be your aim
lets keep it to just knicks history you maim
Zeke’s been here three years, not four as you claim
yes, I know, ’03-’07. don’t even try to play that game.
that ****s misleading like your ultimateknicks name.
you are playa? with little brainpower, like a dumb jock
now here’s my closer you poser, you wanna be pac,
so take a second and just sit back and watch,
and like Howard pointed to the backboard, let me point to the clock
so you can see exactly how long took for me to rip into you and devour
while you probably sat thinking about your **** for hours
the worst part bout your **** is at 21:33 you tried to fix it
and its still worse than Doleac’s head when he bic-ed it
now do yourself a favor and one for anyone who’s read it
take this **** off the forum using that button that says edit

Posted by arkrud:

you are so damn serious gs.
This team is a joke. don't you see?

No he didn't see the joke he wanted to battle with someone LOL

myth, you had me screaming.