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playa2
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2/25/2007  8:50 PM
I've been a knick fan forever how long I can remember, When the knicks were good and tougher than leather. Now times are hard on the blvd, Nets fans reading the paper about the knicks caper , with dolan and zeke our future looks bleak.

How do we recover, from Willis and WALT, the team that talked with their play...and had nothing to say..... but ball.

4 yrs ago zeke gave us false hope , cuz marbury is still the goat , does nate and crawford smoke.....tree believe me


Our style of play makes me say hey , why do I pay , and watch this team play , the way that dolan manages a team, only makes me dream, that one day our time will come , when NY won't play dumb, and our intellect will increase and eddy the beast, would rise to the occasion , and give opponents a piece....... of his mind.


Here goes my close, the current knicks blows, the winds are still hard on the blvd, you say don't lose hope, I say you're on dope , cuz this team likes to choke , like a crackhead when he smokes.

I am playa



[Edited by - playa2 on 02-25-2007 21:33]
JAMES DOLAN on Isiah : He's a good friend of mine and of the organization and I will continue to solicit his views. He will always have strong ties to me and the team.
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mythfaze
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2/25/2007  11:54 PM
don't quit your dayjob
Allanfan20
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2/25/2007  11:57 PM
^LOL
“Whenever I’m about to do something, I think ‘Would an idiot do that?’ and if they would, I do NOT do that thing.”- Dwight Schrute
arkrud
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2/26/2007  12:57 AM
Looks like the season approaching conclusion
Not a lot of fans still have the illusions
Zeke will probably get his extension
Curry will never rich his potential...

Dolan is moron and Jeffries is bust
Steven is old, and Steve not fast
Big Snack is starting and Craf is a chucker
I need to switch and start rooting for soccer…
"There are more things in heaven and earth, Horatio, Than are dreamt of in your philosophy." Hamlet
playa2
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2/26/2007  8:00 AM
I guess most didn't stay tune following the knicks game last night for the

NY KNICKS POETRY SLAM
JAMES DOLAN on Isiah : He's a good friend of mine and of the organization and I will continue to solicit his views. He will always have strong ties to me and the team.
mythfaze
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2/26/2007  8:43 AM
Perhaps its best not to attempt to imitate everything you see on TV. Especially when you risk being outrhymed by 15 year olds.

http://www.msg.com/poetryslam.jsp
arkrud
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2/26/2007  8:45 AM
you are so damn serious gs.
This team is a joke. don't you see?
"There are more things in heaven and earth, Horatio, Than are dreamt of in your philosophy." Hamlet
playa2
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2/26/2007  8:54 AM
Posted by mythfaze:

Perhaps its best not to attempt to imitate everything you see on TV. Especially when you risk being outrhymed by 15 year olds.

http://www.msg.com/poetryslam.jsp

AW... You mad Cuz I'm stYLING oN yOU

JAMES DOLAN on Isiah : He's a good friend of mine and of the organization and I will continue to solicit his views. He will always have strong ties to me and the team.
mythfaze
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2/26/2007  9:11 AM
your close? kid, honestly, where was your start?
you put your name at the end like to write that took smarts,
you go and talk about this **** as if it was art
and yet it takes literally no effort to rip it apart.
look, already about 130 views but you’ve got no replies
they take a quick look fore they’ve gotta avert their eyes
I see you already edited once, but fixing this **** will take more tries
perhaps making this trash public so soon just wasn’t so wise
in fact why you thought it was a good idea to post anything at all is a wonder,
but of all the places you could share maybe a forum was the best possible blunder
cause you’d get laughed out of any poetry slam – even those ones for kids 18 and under,
and anywhere else your ass would just be torn all asunder.
we’re just lucky this is just on paper so we don’t hear you try and sing
but still that’s a lot of words wasted to say not a damn thing
what’s the matter, couldn’t think of anything clever?
putting substance into your writing was a failing endeavor.
and you still sign your name at the end, man whatever,
this just goes to show you’re delusional like Trevor
and you can’t hide - I see what you did to try and flow better
You added an s to some words or you just switched the tense
sure it rhymes now but your **** still don’t make sense
sacrificing one for the other – that mistake is immense
bad decision making like eddy curry playing defense
and, by the way, I looked over and checked.
you used the same rhyme twice.
thought you could get away with that? um, nope, no dice
that’s a no-no like serving cabernet with some ice.
let me sit you down and give a little advice
stop writing. your rhymes just aint nice
go get a new hobby. anything will suffice.
cept for fact checking – that shouldn’t be your aim
lets keep it to just knicks history you maim
Zeke’s been here three years, not four as you claim
yes, I know, ’03-’07. don’t even try to play that game.
that ****s misleading like your ultimateknicks name.
you are playa? with little brainpower, like a dumb jock
now here’s my closer you poser, you wanna be pac,
so take a second and just sit back and watch,
and like Howard pointed to the backboard, let me point to the clock
so you can see exactly how long took for me to rip into you and devour
while you probably sat thinking about your **** for hours
the worst part bout your **** is at 21:33 you tried to fix it
and its still worse than Doleac’s head when he bic-ed it
now do yourself a favor and one for anyone who’s read it
take this **** off the forum using that button that says edit
playa2
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2/26/2007  9:48 AM
you are a pure genius^5



I typed mine up in ABOUT 5 MIN not trying to compete so you got it all wrong.

You should go get a record deal and share the royalties with the UK gang




[Edited by - playa2 on 02-26-2007 09:54]
JAMES DOLAN on Isiah : He's a good friend of mine and of the organization and I will continue to solicit his views. He will always have strong ties to me and the team.
playa2
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2/26/2007  9:55 AM
Posted by arkrud:

you are so damn serious gs.
This team is a joke. don't you see?

No he didn't see the joke he wanted to battle with someone LOL

JAMES DOLAN on Isiah : He's a good friend of mine and of the organization and I will continue to solicit his views. He will always have strong ties to me and the team.
mythfaze
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2/26/2007  10:09 AM
Posted by playa2:
Posted by arkrud:

you are so damn serious gs.
This team is a joke. don't you see?

No he didn't see the joke he wanted to battle with someone LOL

Haha all in fun. My way of attempting to deal with the fact there is a such thing as 9 AM on a Monday morning.
BlueSeats
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2/26/2007  11:25 AM
myth, you had me screaming.
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